Marie: dialogue
Everything Marie says to you across 8 commissions, with every answer you can give, in the game's own words. Story commissions come first, in story order. Marie's page
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Respectful Funeral
Story commission 4 of 53
Read the dialogue
When the commission arrives
Marie
Good afternoon.
Marie
My name is Marie Laroche, and I am here to enquire about a dress for a funeral.
You pick one answer:
- You
Of course. This would be for the funeral of the late duke, correct?
Marie
Yes, that’s right.
- You
This old duke’s death is doing wonders for my business.
Marie
A…rather callous attitude, but I can’t fault your pragmatism.
Marie
Every cloud has its silver lining, I suppose. Good for you, Dressmaker.
- You
…you don’t want something bright pink, do you?
Marie
No? That would be very strange.
YouAnd you don’t want to strike fear into the hearts of other guests?
Marie
…also…………no?
Marie
As a matter of fact, I never met the late duke. This is my first time in Twillford.
Marie
I grew up in the next county over, in Tulleton, but I have spent the last eight years working abroad at the embassy in Charmeuse.
I am new here too!
Marie
Then we should be friends.
Marie
Although I probably won’t stay long. My parents are relocating to Twillford, and I was only given leave to help them settle in.
That sounds very dutiful of you.
Marie
Oh, please say that in my father’s hearing. He would probably fall off his chair laughing.
Marie
No, Dressmaker, I am afraid I am by far his most disreputable daughter. My four sisters are all married, while I have “roamed the world unchaperoned and outrageously dressed.”
Marie
That is how my mother puts it, anyway. In reality, I have…largely only roamed the offices of the embassy building.
And you did so…outrageously dressed?
Marie
Oh, you know, women from Charmeuse favour colourful, patterned clothing. I now feel more comfortable in such dresses.
Marie
…to my mother’s great dismay.
So you are a diplomat?
Marie
No, no, only the assistant to one. At least, for now.
Marie
But I do help with Mr Dervisham’s work!
Marie
…and arrange his social calendar…organise his laundry…make him tea…
Marie
You know, just building my way up.
Right.
Marie
Mr Dervisham has travelled to Twillford too — he says he wishes to meet with the local community, so that he is ‘better positioned to represent their interests abroad.’
Marie
…I suspect he just saw the chance to take a paid vacation.
Marie
In any case, we will both be attending the funeral to offer our respects to the family.
Marie
Unfortunately, I don’t own a single black dress.
Marie
Could you make one for me? It must be simple, formal and elegant. Very demure, very mindful of the occasion. I can offer you 300 for this commission.
Accept Commission
If the dress passes
Marie
Even my mother couldn’t complain about this. It’s just what I need, Dressmaker. Thank you!
If the dress fails
Marie
Oh. Oh, it’s…hmm.
Marie
I think my mother will have some choice words, once she sees me in this dress.
Marie
Those words being: “no,” “never,” and “absolutely not.”
Marie
…what a headache.
Goat Mediation
Story commission 18 of 53
Read the dialogue
When the commission arrives
Marie
Good day.
Oh, good day, Marie. I didn’t expect you would still be in town.
Marie
Neither did I.
Marie
One thing led to another, and, well…
Marie
You might recall that I’m Mr Dervisham’s assistant? Well, at the late Duke’s funeral, Mr Dervisham volunteered to resolve an inheritance dispute for a prominent local family.
Marie
In reality, this means I am helping to resolve this dispute.
Is that the work of a diplomat?
Marie
No.
Marie
Nevertheless!
Marie
The deceased’s will states that the estate is to be equally divided between three sons. Perfectly reasonable, yes?
Marie
The problem is that the estate includes lifestock. And the lifestock includes a young prize-winning goat.
Marie
All three sons want the animal, and are each technically entitled to a third of it.
Marie
…as you might imagine, ‘equitable division of goat’ is a rather grim outcome from an animal welfare perspective.
Poor Master Billygruff.
Marie
Indeed. But the sons aren’t budging, and violent threats are now being made against some perfectly innocent chickens.
Marie
We urgently require a diplomatic resolution!
Marie
Unfortunately, Mr Dervisham has spent the entire week at the country club.
That doesn’t seem fair.
Marie
Oh, it’s just the way of things. The important part is that I remain calm, avoid raising my voice, and refrain from complaining.
Marie
Expressing any anger whatsoever would be disastrous. In part because if I started yelling at this useless excuse of a man, and his STUPID LAUNDRY, and his TEA WITH THREE AND A QUARTER SPOONS OF SUGAR, NO MORE AND NO LESS…
Marie
I might never stop.
Marie
Which would be undiplomatic of me.
Marie
So I shan’t be doing that.
I…see.
Marie
I am a professional.
Marie
…or so I tell myself.
Marie
At times, it feels like all I’ll ever be given credit for is making Mr Dervisham’s tea.
Marie
My mother says ambition is unbecoming in a woman, but I’ve always had a restless spirit. Since I was a girl, I’ve dreamed of being a diplomat — exploring new places, meeting different people, resolving conflict…it seemed so exciting.
Marie
……………
Marie
I must simply try harder. And that starts with resolving all this goat nonsense.
If the dress for Respectful Funeral
passed:
Marie
My respectful appearance at the former Duke's funeral apparently bought me some goodwill from the community, and I won't squander it.
Otherwise:
Marie
My appearance at the former Duke's funeral apparently did not impress the Twillford community, so I'll have to find a way to overcome their animosity."
Marie
Right! I need to remind these three goat-loving sons of a farmer that they are grown men with responsibilities to their chickens. For that, I must dress in a way that makes me feel confident.
Marie
Will you make me a patterned, eclectic dress? It should be flowing and colourful — but not too formal. I don’t want these men to think I am putting on airs. Will 250 be enough?
Accept Commission
If the dress passes
Marie
Ah, perfect! This is just the sort of dress I might wear back in Charmeuse.
Marie
You’ve captured my style so well.
Marie
Thank you for listening to me ramble on, Dressmaker.
Marie
It is sometimes a relief to talk about my frustrations. Strangely, I had a similar feeling while talking to Duke Hassan at his uncle’s funeral.
Marie
He was unexpectedly sympathetic. He even offered to speak to the Princess’ regent on my behalf.
Marie
I imagine he was simply saying that to be nice, but it was kind of him, nonetheless.
Marie
Well, I must be off. Good day!
If the dress fails
Marie
I don’t know if this look communicates ‘diplomat.’
Marie
It might say ‘children’s entertainer?’ That wasn’t the career I had in mind.
Marie
Ah well, what is the harm? The farmers already think I’m strange.
Marie
Thank you for listening to me ramble on, Dressmaker.
Marie
It is sometimes a relief to talk about my frustrations. Strangely, I had a similar feeling while talking to Duke Hassan at his uncle’s funeral.
Marie
He was unexpectedly sympathetic. He even offered to speak to the Princess’ regent on my behalf.
Marie
I imagine he was simply saying that to be nice, but it was kind of him, nonetheless.
Marie
Well, I must be off. Good day!
Spring Fete
Story commission 25 of 53
Read the dialogue
When the commission arrives
Marie
Rejoice, Dressmaker!
Marie
The goat remains in a single piece!
You pick one answer:
- You
Rejoice! Rejoice!
Marie
I feared that Billygruff was going to end up in three separate stewpots, but no!
- You
People in Twillford have the strangest problems.
Marie
Problems that can be solved with diplomacy!
YouAnd with dressmaking, surprisingly.
Marie
Who would have thought fashion could play such a pivotal role in regional politics?
- You
But what about the chickens???
Marie
Also intact! All of the threatened lifestock has survived unscathed!
Marie
The mediation was a little tense, but my proposal that the three heirs take custody of the goat on a rotating monthly basis was accepted.
Marie
The kid will have three daddies.
And Mr Dervisham? Was he impressed?
Marie
Hah! Him!
Marie
What do I care for the opinions of that hapless layabout?
Marie
Mr Dervisham will need to pull up his socks and make his own damn tea, because I quit.
Marie
The farmers wrote letters of commendation for me, and sent them to the regent. To the office of the crown itself!
Marie
As a result, I have been offered a new position as an official diplomatic envoy of Twillford.
Marie
It is unheard of! A woman representing Twillford abroad! My mother is beside herself.
Why did you not say that first? This is far more important than the goat!
Marie
Well, probably not from the goat’s perspective.
Marie
The truth is that the situation is a little complicated.
Marie
You see, I don’t think I would have been offered the position if Duke Hassan had not also spoken up for me.
Marie
Which…entangles things.
Marie
…
Marie
Dressmaker, can you keep a secret?
You pick one answer:
- You
Spill! Spill! Spill!
- You
Customer confidentiality is one of my top priorities.
- You
Uh oh.
Marie
Hassan has admitted that he has feelings for me. Romantic ones.
Marie
He has been, uh…
Marie
writing me poetry.
Poetry!
Marie
Keep your voice down!
Marie
I like him very much too. Where my soul is restless, his is calm. In his company I never feel compelled to hide my true feelings.
Marie
But this courtship…I fear…
Marie
If people find out, they will assume I was only offered a position because of Hassan’s influence.
Marie
And…and what if they are right?
Marie
This might just be, I don’t know, the Duke indulging me. Or worse, attempting to bribe his way into my affections.
Marie
………
Marie
I must tell him what is weighing on my mind. I will see him at the Spring Fete, and explain everything.
Marie
But for that, I will need a new dress.
Marie
Could I ask for an elaborate gown? Eveningwear, of course, and I would like for this dress to be, you know…romantic. I’m envisioning loose, draping silks? I can offer you 500 for the job.
Accept Commission
If the dress passes
Marie
Oh goodness. This is lovelier than I anticipated. You truly get better with every commission, Dressmaker.
Marie
I hope to see you again soon.
If the dress fails
Marie
It’s a good thing the Duke already likes me, because this dress might send him running otherwise.
Marie
…it might still do that, actually.
Marie
I don't know, Dressmaker. Would it be too much trouble for you to take another look at this dress?
No, of course not.
The dress goes back on your table, so you can alter it.
Marie
Really? Oh, thank you so much.
Alter Commission
Marie's Wedding
Story commission 33 of 53
Read the dialogue
When the commission arrives
Marie
Dressmaker!
Marie
I need to hide!
This has taken a sudden dramatic turn.
Marie
Oh, don’t mock me. I’ve spent the last few days hounded by every gossip in Twillford.
Marie
Not to mention my mother.
Marie
The fitting room, maybe. Or I could crawl under your cutting table. If you drape a few bolts of cloth over the edge—
Marie
No, that would never work.
Marie
I will have to adopt a disguise, and change my name. Although, technically, I’m already changing my name, so—
You pick one answer:
- You
Would you kindly explain what is going on?
Marie
You haven’t heard?
- You
Has your undercover identity as a spy been exposed?
Marie
No! And there is a difference between diplomacy and spy craft!
- You
Slow down, Marie.
Marie
Yes, sorry. It’s all rather overwhelming.
Marie
Hassan asked for my hand in marriage.
Marie
It has been utter mayhem.
So, you said…no?
Marie
What? Of course I didn’t say ‘no!’ I adore him.
Marie
He is enough to make me believe in the powers of destiny and providence. If I am the sun, then he is my sky. If he is the moon, then I am the sea drawn helplessly in his wake. He is solid ground, and cool winter air, and the quiet before dawn.
Marie
And I have been reading far too much of his poetry.
Marie
Of course I am marrying Hassan, Dressmaker. That doesn’t mean the choice hasn’t unleashed havoc on the town.
Marie
My mother practically shouted the news from the rooftops.
But what about your dream of becoming a diplomat?
Marie
Oh, that! No, that hasn’t changed at all.
Marie
When Hassan asked me to marry him, it suddenly dawned on me: no matter what I accomplish, people will say that I cheated.
Marie
I can prove myself capable a hundred times over, and then a hundred times more. I can be flawless, I can do everything right…and these people will still be unsatisfied.
Marie
It’s so obvious, isn’t it? I will never escape judgement. I will never be able to stop proving myself.
Marie
And if that’s the case, then…
Marie
Then I might as well embrace the advantages afforded to a diplomat who just so happens to be a Duchess.
Marie
Every day, I will wake up and prove myself again. Every day, I will prove them all wrong.
Marie
And they can watch me.
Whoa.
Marie
Oh, stop that. I’m currently hiding from my own mother inside a dressmaker’s shop.
Marie
Speaking of which, I will actually need a wedding dress in the very near future, so…
Wait, I get to make the wedding dress for a DUCHESS?
Marie
Of course you do. I would trust no one else with the task.
Marie
Everyone’s eyes will be on me — I wish to look powerful, but also true to myself. The dress should be elaborate, eclectic and formal. It need not be traditionally white — I have always felt more comfortable in a little colour. I have 2500 to offer you.
Accept Commission
If the dress passes
Marie
…
Marie
It’s spectacular.
Marie
I don’t know if I am worthy of this dress. It’s…oh no, I mustn’t get emotional now.
I think that should be allowed, every now and again.
Marie
I think I shall be very happy.
Marie
Thank you.
If the dress fails
Marie
…
Marie
…Dressmaker…it's my wedding.
Say no more. I will make adjustments!
The dress goes back on your table, so you can alter it.
Marie
I appreciate you.
Alter Commission
Story commission 47 of 53
Show the commission and its dialogue
When the commission arrives
Marie
Good morning, Dressmaker.
Marie
It’s so nice to be back in your shop.
If you have 48 prestige or more:
Marie
From what I hear, you have gained so much prestige that people are calling your shop the finest in all of Hemstitch.
You pick one answer:
- You
How can I help you, Duchess Marie?
Marie
Oh, you really don’t have to call me ‘Duchess’ in private.
- You
Do I have to bow or curtsy now?
Marie
Please don’t.
- You
Ah, the ambassador for Twillford!
Marie
Don’t be silly. Twillford doesn’t have an ambassador.
Marie
So much has happened since the wedding. I have barely been able to catch my breath.
How is married life?
Marie
Oh, wonderful! Hassan is really coming into his own as the Duke. And I like him so much, I can hardly stand it.
Marie
He is a genuinely good person, you know. He cares for others so deeply.
Marie
But let me not get too sentimental at this time of the morning. Have you heard about the coronation?
The coronation?
Marie
It is all over the broadsheets. The missing Princess has returned! It seems she escaped her kidnappers’ clutches, concealed herself as a humble commoner, and then stole back home to the royal apartments.
Marie
Isn’t it the most dashing story?
Marie
She returned just in the nick of time too — as soon as she comes of age on Sunday, she will ascend to the throne.
Marie
As the Duchess and diplomatic envoy of Twillford, I am expected to attend the coronation. It will be my first official appearance!
Marie
I am very interested to meet this mysterious young woman.
You appear to be settling into the role of Diplomat Duchess very well.
Marie
Oh, it’s been a whirlwind. Directly after the coronation, Hassan and I will be journeying west — the crown wishes for me to reaffirm friendly relations with the nation of Cambric.
Marie
It’s a great responsibility, I know, but I could not be happier.
You’ll come back though, won’t you?
Marie
Of course! In fact, we will probably only be gone for a few months.
Marie
Twillford is home for Hassan.
Marie
And for me, too.
If you have 5 friendship stars or more with Marie
:
Marie
I will miss you in particular. You've been my closest friend in this town.
Marie
First, however, is the coronation!
Marie
Let’s see…I will need a gown. It must be elaborate, glamorous eveningwear. I would like to make a bold statement with a patterned fabric — something that might come from a faraway land, perhaps? I can give you 1500.
Accept Commission
If the dress passes
Marie
My word, Dressmaker.
Marie
I shall be the one who resembles a princess in this dress. It is nothing short of exceptional.
Marie
Not that I expected anything less from you.
Marie
By the way, I don’t suppose you have seen my sister-in-law? Hassan is worried about Priya.
Marie
He said she has not been herself of late, and he believes she might have slipped out the house in the middle of the night yesterday.
Marie
I also feel that she has seemed somewhat…distracted, recently. She has not been painting, and claims to have no appetite.
Marie
In fact, if I did not know better, I would believe her heartbroken.
Marie
I haven’t seen her since yesterday. If you run into her, Dressmaker, please treat her kindly.
If the dress fails
Marie
It is…intriguing?
Marie
Perhaps not in a good way.
Marie
Perhaps in a way that could be perceived as…undiplomatic.
If it's a question of the national importance, I will endeavour to do better.
The dress goes back on your table, so you can alter it.
Marie
You are surely the best Dressmaker in the country.
Alter Commission
Poetic Muse
Pigeon commission
Read the dialogue
When the commission arrives
Marie
Dressmaker, what rhymes with ‘exudes?’
You pick one answer:
- You
Verisimilitudes
Marie
You just had that one ready to deploy!?
- You
Familial feuds
Marie
Thematically weighty, but I don’t think it will quite work.
- You
…Oods.
Marie
'Oods?'
YouYes.
Marie
I am not sure that is a real word.
YouNo, it’s a technical sewing term. You wouldn’t know it.
Marie
Hmmm.
Marie
Oh, I don’t know.
Marie
Hassan is struggling to finish this poem, and asked for my help.
Marie
The problem is that I don’t have a creative bone in my body.
Marie
…you’re an imaginative person, aren’t you?
Ma’am, my business is sewing dresses.
Marie
Very creatively!
Marie
Let’s see…stanza one…
Marie
“In all my dreams, her face exudes…”
You pick one answer:
- You
“a sweetness kin to sugar’d foods.”
Marie
I’m not sure the subject should be edible, but all right. I suppose that seems…cute?
- You
“the grace of her fine attitudes.”
Marie
See, that’s not too terrible.
YouIt sounds like her face is leaking.
Marie
But elegantly.
- You
“my poem is weak, please send me nudes.”
Marie
………
Marie
Still better than anything I can come up with, I’ll take it.
Marie
Next stanza!
Marie
“ She haunts my night, she fills my day…”
You pick one answer:
- You
“Oh rose-bloom love, my heart will stay.”
Marie
Who is this ‘Rose’ character?
Marie
Does Hassan know her?
Marie
I don’t like the sound of her.
- You
“Exorcise her! send her away!”
Marie
Dressmaker, I don’t think the subject is literally haunting the speaker.
YouWho is poem-ing here, me or you?
Marie
Oh, very well.
- You
“Have you consider’d she might be gay?”
Marie
Yes, why shouldn’t the woman be cheerful? Good for her.
Marie
Last stanza!
Marie
“My darling lamb, angel divine”
You pick one answer:
- You
“May our union stand the test of time.”
Marie
Right, of course. But is ‘union’ one syllable or two? Because it doesn’t scan if—
YouIT’S ROMANTIC.
- You
“Joint assets raise our bottom line!”
Marie
What an unexpectedly practical ending. I support these professional, fiscally-savvy lovers.
- You
“Such a great shame you smell like swine.”
Marie
Dressmaker.
Marie
Dressmaker, we are trying to make art here.
YouAnd art must deal with uncomfortable issues, must it not?
Marie
Like…malodour?
Marie
Very well.
Marie
Congratulations, Dressmaker. Together, we have penned possibly the worst poem ever written.
Marie
In all my dreams, her face exudes…
[the line you picked]
She haunts my night, she fills my day…
[the line you picked]
My darling lamb, angel divine
[the line you picked]
Marie
Good grief.
Marie
The written word did not deserve this.
Marie
And yet we must commemorate our accomplishment somehow.
Marie
Yes.
Marie
Yes, you will make me a dress inspired by this poem.
Marie
It should be [cute / elegant / risqué], [floral / goth / colorful], and [romantic / professional / uncomfortable]. You have a budget of 500.
Marie
Share our vision with the world, Dressmaker.
Accept Commission
If the dress passes
Marie
Breathtaking.
Marie
It is a monument to our efforts, and I will treasure it always.
Marie
We are quite the literary duo, aren’t we?
Marie
Now, let me go deliver this poem to Hassan.
If the dress fails
Marie
Well.
Marie
At least this dress cannot be said to be worse than the poem that inspired it.
Marie
Because that poem is terrible.
Marie
Let me go deliver the poem to Hassan. His reaction will probably take my mind off this dress.
Perfect Picnic
Pigeon commission
Read the dialogue
When the commission arrives
Marie
Hello.
Marie
Isn’t it a beautiful sunny day? You shouldn’t be cooped up inside!
You pick one answer:
- You
Alas, I am beset by the need to earn an income.
Marie
Your financial situation must be dire. You work seven days a week.
- You
Sunlight tempts me not. I am one with the dark and the cloth.
Marie
…
Marie
No, I definitely think you should get out more.
- You
Maybe I will take tomorrow off?
Marie
You should! You work too hard.
Marie
It’s the perfect weather for a picnic!
Marie
I have an old friend visiting me from Charmeuse. I’m showing her around town tomorrow, and then we’ll have tea on the lawns outside the library.
Marie
This friend is very dear to me. When I first moved to Charmeuse, she took me under her wing and helped me to learn the local language.
Marie
It’s a joy to have her in Twillford!
Marie
Would you be willing to make me a dress for our picnic? I wish for it to be bright and patterned, so that my friend doesn’t feel out of place wearing her clothes from Charmeuse. Just something cool and eclectic for the daytime. I can offer you 500.
Accept Commission
If the dress passes
Marie
How fun! It will be just like summer in Charmeuse. Thank you, Dressmaker.
Marie
Do try to leave your sewing machine every now and again?
If the dress fails
Marie
Well, my friend’s eyesight is not very good, so maybe she won’t feel too embarrassed to be seen with me.
Marie
I would not bet on it, though.
A gift for Marie
Gift commission
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If the gift gets the best result
Marie
How did you…I’m speechless. This is…well, it’s flawless?
Marie
I have no idea how you managed to create a dress this perfect. The silk, the trim, the colour? I could not ask for more. Thank you so much!
If the gift is a success
Marie
Oh, thank you, Dressmaker. I could certainly imagine myself wearing this.
If the gift fails
Marie
Well. You tried. Perhaps you could reuse some of the fabric for another dress? Then again…maybe not.
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